Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to a few, eminent personalities have to pay the price for being popular by compromising their privacy.
However
, along with others, I believe that
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should not do the invasion in their personal life. Many people think that
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fame comes with
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cost as popular persons have earned
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popularity by getting the attention of
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. They need to share everything about
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to remain in the limelight;
therefore
nothing remains private. To illustrate, if actors would not share pictures of their activities for a longer duration
then
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their
followers will not remember them after
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time.
Thus
, they are
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to capture photos of what they are wearing, where they are travelling and many other personal activities.
On the contrary
, they have the
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to keep their matters private if they do not wish to make
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them
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public. Without asking for their permission,
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the media
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captures and prints
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everything
every thing
to gain television rating points.
This
does not only compromise the personal life of a
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person but
also
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the wrong message to
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society.
For instance
, if any cricketer is spotted having dinner with a female friend
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news reporters will not miss
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opportunity and represent it as if they are in a relationship; whereas they might be just friends.
Hence
, I believe that enjoying privacy is
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human right and a celebrity should be entitled
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the same. To conclude, a mass of people believe that the eminent person should not be followed at all places and their privacy should be respected by not clicking their
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pictures
all the time.
Nevertheless
, others think that they have become popular with the support of
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so
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is the price
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needs to be paid. In my opinion, everyone should be allowed to live their private life without any disturbance regardless of their social status.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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