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Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The
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 system has always been a subject of debate among people. The latest point of contention is the value of physical education classes and if the time should be redirected towards academic endeavours. I believe the importance of PE classes cant be undervalued and a balance of both views is the way to go. On the one hand, The main reason for sports class in
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 is its health
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. With today's ,sedentary lifestyle schools must take it upon themselves to obligate and educate the youth to be more active and healthy.
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, a biweekly PE class.
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,
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 team sports are a tool
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 which
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 may acquire and hone multiple traits. Via the participation in a team
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 the
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 work on their teamwork, leadership and many other skills that are applicable outside of the field. to illustrate, studies show
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 that played a team sport are more successful in their adult life.
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, the primary goal of the
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 is scholastic.
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 attend
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 to learn and for that 100% of their time should be applied to sharpen their minds in ways that may advance them.
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, the learning of a
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 language.
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, a secondary goal is
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 preparation for college. Nowadays, the competition to be admitted to College is a fierce one,
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 time that could be used to improve SAT skills can not be wasted. To give an example, the competition for medical
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 in Israel is immense and only the best of the best may enter. In conclusion,
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 the
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 of the academic part of the educational system are clear to
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the
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 of sanctioned physical education on the kid's health and mental skills can not be denied and should be fostered as it will have long-lasting
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.
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