As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate

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students

should spend their

time

settling down in another country to learn its language and

culture

. In my opinion, I would not consider myself an advocate of

this

idea. Without a shadow of a doubt, studying overseas is one of the best choices and brings a lot of benefits to

students

. Because

students

not only obtain knowledge about other nations

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but

also

experience a bunch of

culture

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and are made up of independence.

For example

,

Motreal

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Montreal

in Canada is famous for the film industry

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is not ubiquitous in Vietnam, so there are a lot of families that allow their children who have

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passion to learn there.

Hence

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by utilizing

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time

to study in another country to learn language and

culture

,

students

also

learn a lot of knowledge that they can not have in their country. While the redeeming features of the pros of studying abroad are widely acknowledged, there are still a bunch of difficulties when

students

spare their

time

arising in other nations. One of the challenges is financial problems, which determine most of the

students’

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study

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overseas. Because it is not only for accommodation, flight or meals, but

also

people have to pay tuition fees that can reach some billions in 1,2 years. What’s more,

students

also

feel

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culture

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due to having a huge distinct

culture

.

For instance

, while a thumbs up in other countries like the US means good,

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in

Iran

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it is considered insulting and swearing at someone.

Thus

, living in another nation to learn

also

brings a formidable negative impact on

students

' lives. In conclusion,

although

there are considerable reasons to pin down why people choose to study abroad as a part of education, I would contend that it is not necessary to have spent

time

settling down in other nations to learn languages and cultures.