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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individulas to solve this problem?

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The damage that has been done to the environment by using
plastic
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 products is irreversible. It
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effects
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affects
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 every aspect of
environment
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the environment
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, from animals to human beings.
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 we are in a critical situation, some measures can still be taken for helping the environment.
Plastic
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 products have greatly disturbed the ecosystem of planet Earth. An
octupus
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octopus
 has been seen living in a
plastic
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 cup
,
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 because it had mistaken the cup for a shell. disturbing the ecosystem - animals struggling to live in the midst of
plastic
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 pollution microplastic in
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 blood government - ban using single-use
plastic
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 items
individulas
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individuals
 - using longer-lasting items in exchange for
plastic
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 products
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