An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think that this has brought people closer together while other things people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give you opinion.
Modern technology enjoys having been incorporated into daily habits.
Moreover
, social media
applications such
as Facebook, Twitter, and Messenger are vital
role Correct article usage
a vital
at
Change preposition
in
present
generation Correct article usage
the present
into
meeting new Change preposition
in
people
and interact
Wrong verb form
interacting
with
. Correct pronoun usage
themwith
Similarly
, having claimed to brought people
in close contact, while
others have become isolated. In my opinion, social Correct word choice
apply
media
has a massive impact in
Change preposition
on
the
society because Correct article usage
apply
interaction
is easily attainable Add an article
the interaction
with
different time Change preposition
within
frame
, whereas Fix the agreement mistake
frames
it's
negative impact makes Correct your spelling
its
people
to
limit face-to-face conversation.
The internet Change the verb form
apply
social
Correct word choice
and social
media
provides the society closer together; and
a possibility to have connected with new Change the punctuation
, and
;
people
all over the world. In addition
, having everyday conversation
with several Fix the agreement mistake
conversations
people
produces light mode especially
Add the comma(s)
,especially
to
individuals with Change preposition
for
same
Correct article usage
the same
interest
and Fix the agreement mistake
interests
passion
. Friendship is gain to have obtained even though they only meet thru Fix the agreement mistake
passions
website
. Add an article
the website
a website
For example
, I have meet
several of my friends thru twitter Change the verb form
met
although
we have not meet
in person, and because we Change the verb form
met
breath
the same content like Replace the word
breathe
same
celebrities Correct article usage
the same
idolizes
our conversation takes hours and hours.
Correct subject-verb agreement
idolize
On the other hand
, the
social Correct article usage
apply
media
has negative
side because it limits Correct article usage
a negative
the
society's face-to-face interaction. Most Correct article usage
apply
of
the Change preposition
apply
people
are occupied about having in-front of the gadgets all the time, and the value of direct
contract becomes less important. Correct article usage
a direct
Furthermore
, it can develop into self-isolation that can affect the persons
way of thinking Change to a genitive case
person's
persons'
with
other Change preposition
about
people
. For instance
, at some point in my life, I developed a lack of confidence to talk with other people
in person because I felt they may judge me.
In conclusion, the internet makes waves to have constructed in peoples interaction, which created easy access in different time zone and places, however
it provides direct communication less important.Add a comma
,however
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