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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #time #loss #species #animals
SONE THINKS THAT DUE TO CHANGES IN THE ATMOSPHERE ,SOME OF THE ANIMALS AND
SPECIES
 ARE ON THE EDGE OF THE EXTINCTION AND
THIS
 IS THE MOST CONCERNING POINT THESE DAYS .WHILE THE OTHERS GREY HAIR PEOPLE THINK EXACTLY OPPOSITE TO IT .THEY SAT THAT THERE ARE MANY MORE OTHER
PROBLEMS
 RELATED TO THE
ENVIRONMENT
. IN MY OPINION ,BOTH ARE CORRECT, I WILL EXPLAIN BOTH THE POINTS IN THE UPCOMING PARAGRAPHS WITH AN EXAMPLE . HERE I WOULD LIKE TO EXPLAIN HOW COULD WE PROTECT
SPECIES
 AND ANIMALS BE VANISHED. AS WE KNOW TEMPERATURE OF THE
ENVIRONMENT
 CHANGES DAY BY DAY ,OWING TO
THIS
 WE CAN SEE THE TIGERS ARE DIMINISHED .ONLY 120 TIGERS ARE LEFT .FOR CONTROLLING THE TEMPERATURE WE SHOULD GROW TREES FREQUENTLY AS WE CUT THEM. OTHER
SPECIES
 IN THE JUNGLE ARE
ALSO
 IN THE DANGER . THEY CAN'T FIND FRESH OR CLEAR
WATER
 TO DRINK . IN A REPORT BY AN ENVIRONMENTALIST SURVEY ,THE MOST OF THE DIFFERENT
SPECIES
 LIKE LAND ,AIR AND
WATER
 HAVE DIED DUE TO
WATER
 POLLUTION . WE DUMP PLASTIC BAGS DIRECTLY IN THE
WATER
 AFTER THE WORSHIPPING .
ON THE OTHER HAND
 ,OTHER ENVIRONMENTAL MENACES ARE AIR POLLUTION WHICH CAUSES THE DEPLETION OF THE OZONE LAYER .DUE TO ,DEPLETION THERE ARE
THE
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 LOT OF HEALTH ISSUES ARE OCCURRED .
FOR INSTANCE
 SKIN CANCER , SUNBURN .ANOTHER IS
WATER
 POLLUTION ,AS WE THROW A LOT OF THINGS IN THE
WATER
 WITHOUT THINKING A
SECOND
 THOUGHT .THAT CREATES MASSIVE
PROBLEMS
.MUCH MORE
PROBLEMS
 REGARDING THE
ENVIRONMENT
 . TO RECAPITULATE,WE SHOULD THINK ABOUT THE
ENVIRONMENT
 BEFORE DOING ANYTHING. GOVERNMENT AND INDIVIDUALS HAVE THE RELATIONSHIP OF SKIN AND NAILS .BOTH SHOULD PUT THEIR FOOT IN THEIR SHOES TO MITIGATE THE
PROBLEMS
 OF THE
ENVIRONMENT
. GOVERNMENT CAN'T DO ALONE ANYTHING ,INDIVIDUAL SHOULD HELP.
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