Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

SONE THINKS THAT DUE TO CHANGES IN THE ATMOSPHERE ,SOME OF THE ANIMALS AND
SPECIES
ARE ON THE EDGE OF THE EXTINCTION AND
THIS
IS THE MOST CONCERNING POINT THESE DAYS .WHILE THE OTHERS GREY HAIR PEOPLE THINK EXACTLY OPPOSITE TO IT .THEY SAT THAT THERE ARE MANY MORE OTHER
PROBLEMS
RELATED TO THE
ENVIRONMENT
. IN MY OPINION ,BOTH ARE CORRECT, I WILL EXPLAIN BOTH THE POINTS IN THE UPCOMING PARAGRAPHS WITH AN EXAMPLE . HERE I WOULD LIKE TO EXPLAIN HOW COULD WE PROTECT
SPECIES
AND ANIMALS BE VANISHED. AS WE KNOW TEMPERATURE OF THE
ENVIRONMENT
CHANGES DAY BY DAY ,OWING TO
THIS
WE CAN SEE THE TIGERS ARE DIMINISHED .ONLY 120 TIGERS ARE LEFT .FOR CONTROLLING THE TEMPERATURE WE SHOULD GROW TREES FREQUENTLY AS WE CUT THEM. OTHER
SPECIES
IN THE JUNGLE ARE
ALSO
IN THE DANGER . THEY CAN'T FIND FRESH OR CLEAR
WATER
TO DRINK . IN A REPORT BY AN ENVIRONMENTALIST SURVEY ,THE MOST OF THE DIFFERENT
SPECIES
LIKE LAND ,AIR AND
WATER
HAVE DIED DUE TO
WATER
POLLUTION . WE DUMP PLASTIC BAGS DIRECTLY IN THE
WATER
AFTER THE WORSHIPPING .
ON THE OTHER HAND
,OTHER ENVIRONMENTAL MENACES ARE AIR POLLUTION WHICH CAUSES THE DEPLETION OF THE OZONE LAYER .DUE TO ,DEPLETION THERE ARE
THE
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LOT OF HEALTH ISSUES ARE OCCURRED .
FOR INSTANCE
SKIN CANCER , SUNBURN .ANOTHER IS
WATER
POLLUTION ,AS WE THROW A LOT OF THINGS IN THE
WATER
WITHOUT THINKING A
SECOND
THOUGHT .THAT CREATES MASSIVE
PROBLEMS
.MUCH MORE
PROBLEMS
REGARDING THE
ENVIRONMENT
. TO RECAPITULATE,WE SHOULD THINK ABOUT THE
ENVIRONMENT
BEFORE DOING ANYTHING. GOVERNMENT AND INDIVIDUALS HAVE THE RELATIONSHIP OF SKIN AND NAILS .BOTH SHOULD PUT THEIR FOOT IN THEIR SHOES TO MITIGATE THE
PROBLEMS
OF THE
ENVIRONMENT
. GOVERNMENT CAN'T DO ALONE ANYTHING ,INDIVIDUAL SHOULD HELP.
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