The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 200 and projecting for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 200 and projecting for 2050.
The charts below show the differences in
growth
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the growth
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of the
population
between
Yemen
and Italy,
according to
ages from 2000 to the
next
50
years
. In 2000
Yemen
have a small percentage of 3.6% of 60+
years
old, a moderated
population
of 46.3% of 15-59
years
old and a higher percentage of 50.1% of young people ages 0-14
years
old.
On the other hand
, in 2000 Italy have a remarkable difference in percentages of
population
per age
in contrast
with
Yemen
, 24.1% of 60+
years
old, 61.6% of 15-59
years
old and 14.3% of 0-14
years
old. In
this
chart is clear that Italy's
population
of 65 plus have a huge jump, going from 24.1% in 2000 to 42.2% in the
next
50
years
, compared with
Yemen
's
population
of 60 plus increasing from 3.6% to 5.7% in the same period. In ,conclusion the chart below shows that
Yemen
will not have a massive change in
population
percentages per age in the coming 50
years
compared with Italy's
population
which will have a significant change of nearly double the
population
in their
60 plus
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60-plus
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years
old.
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