You live in a house opposite a park. Every day a man brings large dogs to the park and lets them run free. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the danger. In your letter -say where the park is, -say how often this happens -give a description of the man and the dogs.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter to express my concern regarding the nuisance caused by the two
dogs
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in the
park
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. I live at Gandhinagar Second Street, near the
park
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. My children go to the
park
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every time to play and sit there to relax. Sometimes, I
also
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go with them for enjoyment and to improve my mental and physical well-being.
However
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, a big concern is arised nowadays by two big
dogs
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that were brought by a man recently to the
park
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. The
dogs
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look like big lions. The man is very careless about the
dogs
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. He let the
dogs
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run freely around the
park
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. Sometimes, the
dogs
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come by my children and engage in some dangerous activities. The children get frozen and scared, and somehow run away from there.
Consequently
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, they are really scared to come to the
park
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now. So, I humbly request that you strictly prohibit the entry of animals
as well as
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pets to the
park
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.
In addition
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, please charge a fine if anybody brings their pets to the
park
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. I would be grateful if you could take the necessary actions immediately. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rahul.

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Say the place of the park more clearly in one line.
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Say how often this happens with clear words like every day or each evening.
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Give a clearer picture of the man and the dogs with a few true details.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple linking words like also, but, so, and because.
coherence and cohesion
Keep one main point in each paragraph.
coherence and cohesion
Make your ideas move in time order: place, problem, result, request.
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You answer all parts of the task.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear start and end.
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The problem and your request are easy to see.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • public safety
  • unleashed
  • danger to pedestrians
  • local regulations
  • particular concern
  • pose risk
  • hazard to children
  • aggressive behavior
  • council action
  • identifiable features
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