Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future, with countries gradually joining together into larger units. Write an essay expressing your opinion about this topic and support it with arguments including: • lower taxes and prices associated with being part of a free-trade area; • ability to travel freely between countries to live or work; • how countries modernise and influence one another when they join together. (Word limit: 200-220 words)

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The European
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is an
organisation
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known by many people. It dates back around 40 years ago and started with only a few
countries
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. Gradually the European
Union
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increased
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size and popularity and by the end of
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the 20th
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century
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almost all
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europeian
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European
countries
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joined the
organisation
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. Most people
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that the model of the European
Union
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is
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in
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the future, with
countries
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gradually joining together into larger units. When a country joins the
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Europeian
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European
Union
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it gains all benefits and that
are
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: The
organistaion
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organisation
lowers
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taxes and prices associated
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with being
part of a free trade area,
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if a crisis occurs the
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Europeian
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European
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will fund the country in need to deal with the problem. Another benefit is the ability to travel freely between
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to live and work. You only need
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card not a red passport
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or
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a visa.
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get bigger and better every
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and the reason for
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because by being in the
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Europeian
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European
Union
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they see themselves as friends and exchange or sell stocks and valuable resources.
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also
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are being more modernistic because of the funding
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the
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. Being a part of a grown
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known for many years and respected worldwide is a great thing for developing a country or your own life too. My opinion is that all the
countries
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in Europe need to join because if we are united we are stronger and friendlier,
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we will help the poor
countries
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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