Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that it is good for boys and girls to study in single-sex
schools
. While I tend towards the viewpoint that they would have more benefits from attending mixed schools
.
On the one hand, adults believe that boys and girls will get higher academic results if they go to single-sex institutes. Because they aren’t distracted from early relationships, students
spend more time and effort concentrating on their studies. For example
, a girl teenage student falls in love with a boy, she gradually takes care of her appearance and spends more spare time hanging out with that boy, hence
she might forget to do homework and get a low score on the test. Even though there are several solutions to tackle this
problem. Entering a single-gender school makes it students
difficult to communicate with colleagues, especially after graduation.
On the other hand
, I would believe that mixed-gender education brings more benefits for both boy and girl students
. This
environment would teach them how should communicate and interact with opposite-sex classmates. Because each gender has a different way of taking. For example
, men are more likely to talk about things and facts, whereas women tend to talk about people, relations and feelings. Therefore
, students
from mixed-sex schools
find it easy to work collaboratively with opposite-gender colleagues than those from single-sex schools
.
In conclusion, some people think that single-gender schools
are the best educational environment for boys and girls. But from my perspective, mixed-gender education provides better conditions for students
, especially in the working environment.Submitted by nhathu1109 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite