Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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the

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better result or an increase in

knowledge

, colleges are working too hard. Nowadays schools or universities are doing lots of work from the students. I suppose

this

is a positive sign for pupils and I will discuss the positive

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in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, schools and universities try to hard work behind beginners. Because

,

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they are the future of the country.

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, for a bright future and

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with enjoyable life, children should prepare for school life. Because of, the university is

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one of the best places which pupils learn many things

likewise

, communication between the two people, increase the

skill

, as well as

knowledge

about

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field. Apart from

this

, we know about, in the modern country, human life is too fast and hard.

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result

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many competition occurs among

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human.

However

, if the student has a

skill

or

knowledge

, so it will be easy to survive.

Although

, these kinds of

knowledge

or

skill

are only provided by school or college.

Moreover

, from the burden of the school, children’s futures

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like stars.

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, we know

about

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, big MNC companies are

requrites

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requires

only those people who

has

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great

knowledge

and

skill

, as well as

they

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depends on their educational background. So

this

reason, many universities are doing more pressure on the schooler to get a high scores band.

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, they are

aligible

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eligible

to

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good company.

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, if the load is higher

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then

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student’s capacity

then

it will be harmful to children. Sometimes they

are keep

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going into depression. To conclude, a load of the work is better for their future but sometimes the opposite happens. So one side is good for students for good career growth while, on other hand, it will be harmful to beginners.