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Living in a country where you have to speak to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Immigrate abroad is aggressively increasing in recent years and immigrants have to speak a foreign
language
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.
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 may
cause
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 a
lot
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 of
problems
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, especially in the
first
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 years of their entrance. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss some reasons. Speaking in a foreign
language
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 is necessary for those who have chosen to live in a foreign country and it may
cause
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problems
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 in some aspects of life
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 as communication. It is hard to communicate with strangers and gets worse if strangers speak a different
language
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.
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, making friends is very hard in
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 situation and may
cause
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 more mental
problems
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such
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 as homesickness. No one like to do leisure activities solely but speaking a foreign
language
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 may be very hard for someone. As far as they try to find someone who speaks as them to solve some social
problems
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.
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,
this
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 can
cause
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 practical
problems
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 as well. Doing daily routines and everyday requirements including shopping need to speak the same as natives and the inability to convey correct words may
cause
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 a
lot
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 of
problems
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such
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 as misunderstanding. So far, a
lot
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 of people try to find places administrated by the same
language
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 person to solve these issues. It causes appear territories in some megacities where there live a
lot
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 of people from the same country.
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, a large number of Iranian who have immigrated to Toronto live in the same street which has a
lot
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 of stores and restaurants administrated by Persians.
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, I think it may
cause
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 some
problems
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 but I believe they should try to solve it by more participating and communicating with native citizens and begin to behave in their culture and make friends. In conclusion, living in another country and speaking a new
language
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 are hard and would
cause
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 some social and practical
problems
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, but the new people should try to solve these
problems
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 by more activity in society.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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