Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future, with countries gradually joining together into larger units. Write an essay expressing your opinion about this topic and support it with arguments including: • lower taxes and prices associated with being part of a free-trade area; • ability to travel freely between countries to live or work; • how countries modernise and influence one another when they join together. (Word limit: 200-220 words)

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the world's definition for bringing people and making life better. But who really gets benefits from that? Are the normal people the ones who get help from the more powerful and influential

countries

or are they just slaves to their belives?

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with, joining a unit blesses the citizens with the ability to travel freely between

countries

to live or work.

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, if we look from the eyes of

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we will understand that going to a country outside

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will require us to have

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. Another opportunity

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life

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the lower taxes and prices associated with being

part

of a free trade area. On the other side, being

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such

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destruction of the powerless

countries

. With the concept of modernising and influencing one another. When joined together, the more powerful

countries

take the chance to get the free will of the powerless ones. In conclusion, for your country to be a

part

of a big unit could benefit from not getting

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protected.

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could help the country with economical problems. But all in all the most important

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is that the

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with less power should find a way to not become slaves in the blindness of

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loyalty

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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