the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that shopping on the internet has become very popular in recent times and
as a result
, some people
think that the gradual increase in this
platform can extinct the face-to-face shop inmetropolis
, in my opinion, I agree with Correct your spelling
metropolis
in metropolis
this
thought.
In my view that
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apply
,
shopping online has numerous benefits for both congested Remove the comma
apply
city
and remote Fix the agreement mistake
cities
place
. Nowadays humans find it difficult to go Fix the agreement mistake
places
for
shopping because they do not have enough time. Change preposition
apply
The most
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Most
of
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apply
people
who work in the capital suffer from a sizable amount of working hours .The situation is compounded by the fact that they are compelled to go for buying new
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a new
shirt
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shirts
in
the rush hour. Change preposition
during
For example
, Tokyo is one of the most crowded cities in the world and many people
work more than 16 hours in
per day.Change preposition
apply
therefore
, about
more than half of Change preposition
apply
population
use Correct article usage
the population
onlineshops
to provide Correct your spelling
online shops
their
needs. another point to consider is the fact that there Change preposition
for their
is
a lot of options to choose from so you are not restricted to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
purchase
items from the particular location you reside in. Wrong verb form
purchasing
for instance
, although
, I live in Iran, I can order a dress from Turkey via the platform and it will be sent to me directly without any stress, in turn, many shopping sites are well-known now like Amazoon
, Ali baba and so on Correct your spelling
Amazon
also
several famous brands presented their own online suggestions version.
In contrast
, some people
claim that purchasing stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
especially
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,especially
for
clothes is not reasonable. They firmly insist because you are not sure about the size. Change preposition
apply
However
, I do not find this
argument convincing the standard of size is same in all around the world, in order to, all clothes ever other stuffs
like Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
accessory
. online Add an article
an accessory
shoppings
have specified the scale of products Fix the agreement mistake
shopping
in
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on
site
.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the idea that increasing online buying should be replaced by shopping in person because it can be useful to save time in Add an article
the site
crowd
cities and make more options to select.Replace the word
crowded
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