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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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Technology i.e. tablets,
laptops
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and laptops
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 usage has increased widely for education. It is argued that technology usage has immense benefits, while others think it has negative consequences.
This
 essay agrees that computer use is a boon to
a
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 individual life Students and Teachers can
access
 information with just one click, which is the ultimate benefit to gaining quick knowledge, rather than looking for books that take a longer time to abstract information. Any data can be collected easily through an internet connection and computers. Wikipedia can give
access
 to any facts you browse.
For Instance
, Google Scholar is the primary source for research studies, that show 70% of
people
 get cancer due to cigarette smoking. With
increased
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the increased
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 use of tablets, individuals’ social interactions have
impacted
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been impacted
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 negatively,
people
 tend to stay home, and spend more time with gadgets. whereas, It is believed there are numerous possibilities with the device to socialize i.e. social media
such
 as Facebook, Whatsapp, and Instagram give
access
 to chat, call, video call options, and
therefore
 it depends on the person who wants to stay connected with
people
.
This
 essay agrees that the positive outcomes of internet usage overweighs the negative. In conclusion,
people
 can
access
a
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apply
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various sources of content through the internet but may lack social interaction, which again can be solved through social media platforms
such
 as Facebook,
Whatsapp
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and Whatsapp
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,
therefore
 Computer is a useful source for human beings.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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