Some people think that healthcare should be free for everyone others think that people should pay for their medical costs themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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increase
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physcian
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physician
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a charge
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charged
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fees
to
what procedure she had received. Change preposition
on
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well
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numerous people cannot afford the costly treatment.
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, few inhabitant
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inhabitants
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with
this
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surgery
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for
those consumed instrument
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preventing
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