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Some people think that it is good to be ambitious. How important is it to be ambitious? Do you think it’s a good characteristic?

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Nowadays the word ambitious is commonly used especially to describe successful personalities, it has become one of the most desirable characteristics for everyone.
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 view as well as my opinion which is in harmony with the postulate; I certainly consider that ambition assures accomplishing the objectives.
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 ambition sometimes could be considered negative when people are selfish and do whatever is necessary to achieve their goals there is no problem if we have a balance between that and our empathy with
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, it is always better than just staying in a comfort zone and having no expectations of improving life quality.
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, someone with clear and established short, medium, and long plans will develop a major life quality than someone who conforms to what they have and never thinks about the future.
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, I think
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 an essential characteristic that guarantees never drop our expectations and think out of the box, go deeper and develop ourselves as professionals, people, and citizens.
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, we need to be aware of the well-being of
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 too and avoid passing through
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 just to get what we want. In
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 way, the success will taste better and will make us proud of ourselves forever.
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, if on your way to get that precious new car you did not damage anyone and worked for it with all your energy I assure you the satisfaction will be unbelievable. To conclude, ambition is positive because pushes us out of our limitations and helps us to manage our
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 in a successful way but of course always with respect to
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. I highly encourage you appreciated reader to evaluate your personality and identify if you are being ambitious enough to obtain that aim that you have in mind, if you are not
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 is the moment to change it and begin.
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