The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the fuel cost. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that raising the
cost
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of
fuel
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will solve the problem of the environment.
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this
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policy can help reduce the global
environment
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issue, there are many alternative and better solutions to
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issue, from my point of view. On the one hand, raising taxes on
fuel
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may help in reducing air pollution and the carbon footprint of each individual. If the
cost
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of
fuel
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increases, people would limit the use of private vehicles and use public
transports
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.
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, the quantity of hazardous gas emissions that cause air pollution is limited, and at the same time, the process of air pollution and global warming can be impeded.
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, an increase in
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prices cannot exhaustively solve the world’s environmental problems.
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with, higher
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prices will put a heavy financial burden on the underprivileged, especially ones living in poverty-stricken countries. If poor inhabitants struggle with more expensive goods, they could create some riots, and disrupt the political situation of the country, even the whole world politics.
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, the fact that rising
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fuel
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cannot decrease the
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demand of consumers.
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instead
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of rising
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cost
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, governments had better invest more in the discovery of alternative energy for sustainable growth. In conclusion, while increasing
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costs can partly tackle the environmental problems, there are more effective solutions that can settle climate change and environmental problems.
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