Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. Do you agree or disagree?

Computer

games

are enjoyable, but it's strange that even though people know

games

have their drawbacks too, people still play them. Over the years, it has emerged that most teenagers are choosing to play

games

with their friends rather than going out and doing outdoor activities. Many parents who are worried that their

children

will become irresponsible

students

have criticized their kids or confiscated their phones/computers, hoping they get a better life or grades.

However

, I believe that

students

can develop their

skills

if they play

computer

games

, and gaming can be a way to earn a living

First

of all,

students

can develop their

skills

if they play

computer

games

.

Games

can be classified into different types, for

one

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

example a puzzle

game

,

this

type

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

game

contains many levels that require the player to solve by using

problem solving

Add a hyphen

problem-solving

show examples

skills

, different

strategy

Fix the agreement mistake

strategies

show examples

, solve various puzzles in order to pass and make it to the

next

level. If

students

are willing to practice their ability to solve

problems

effectively.

This

type of

game

can be chosen as a learning assistant.

Moreover

,

children

can improve their socializing

skills

by communicating with other gamers.

Secondly

, gaming can be a way to earn a living.

Streamer

Add an article

The streamer

A streamer

show examples

is one of the careers

that is

growing in popularity nowadays. Streamers can earn money by streaming

games

for viewers to watch and gain

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

support from them, mainly by donating.

Furthermore

,

There

Fix capitalization

there

show examples

is another career, which is an e-sport athlete.

Children

with great gaming

skills

can become

an

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

e-sport

athlete

Fix the agreement mistake

athletes

show examples

. Generally, each

game

has its own league

game

in which the winners of the tournament are rewarded with prize money and will

also

receive fame.

Thus

, the increase in the number of people who play

games

created many new careers.

Nevertheless

, many parents claim that

games

have a negative effect on

children

’s health. It causes eye

problems

, with symptoms

such

as dry eyes, red eyes or irritated eyes, and these symptoms can occur if a kid spends a long time staring at a

computer

screen. It may be true that some

children

will face physical health

problems

.

However

, these

problems

can be solved easily if

children

can learn to improve management

skills

by

practicing

Change the spelling

practising

show examples

their kids to be responsible for themselves.

Children

need to learn how to manage and balance their time to fit their lifestyle, and if they are able to do it, playing

games

will not be

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

problem for them anymore. In conclusion, for all reasons mentioned above,

children

will receive several benefits

by

Change preposition

from

show examples

playing

games

.

Such

as a way to earn a living, choose as a learning assistant, even helping

students

to be responsible for themselves. Playing

games

will not have a negative impact on

Correct your spelling

children

children's

childrens

Correct your spelling

children

show examples

if they know how to manage their time and take care of themselves properly.