Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. Do you agree or disagree?
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have their drawbacks too, people still play them. Over the years, it has emerged that most teenagers are choosing to play Use synonyms
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with their friends rather than going out and doing outdoor activities. Many parents who are worried that their Use synonyms
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computer
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, and gaming can be a way to earn a living
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students
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computer
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can be chosen as a learning assistant. Use synonyms
Moreover
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children
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skills
by communicating with other gamers.
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Secondly
, gaming can be a way to earn a living. Linking Words
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The streamer
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Thus
, the increase in the number of people who play Linking Words
games
created many new careers.
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Nevertheless
, many parents claim that Linking Words
games
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children
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such
as dry eyes, red eyes or irritated eyes, and these symptoms can occur if a kid spends a long time staring at a Linking Words
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Children
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problem for them anymore.
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