Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. Do you agree or disagree?
Computer
games
are enjoyable, but it's strange that even though people know games
have their drawbacks too, people still play them. Over the years, it has emerged that most teenagers are choosing to play games
with their friends rather than going out and doing outdoor activities. Many parents who are worried that their children
will become irresponsible students
have criticized their kids or confiscated their phones/computers, hoping they get a better life or grades. However
, I believe that students
can develop their skills
if they play computer
games
, and gaming can be a way to earn a living
First
of all, students
can develop their skills
if they play computer
games
. Games
can be classified into different types, for one
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game
, this
type of
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game
contains many levels that require the player to solve by using problem solving
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problem-solving
skills
, different strategy
, solve various puzzles in order to pass and make it to the Fix the agreement mistake
strategies
next
level. If students
are willing to practice their ability to solve problems
effectively. This
type of game
can be chosen as a learning assistant. Moreover
, children
can improve their socializing skills
by communicating with other gamers.
Secondly
, gaming can be a way to earn a living. Streamer
is one of the careers Add an article
The streamer
A streamer
that is
growing in popularity nowadays. Streamers can earn money by streaming games
for viewers to watch and gain the
support from them, mainly by donating. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, There
is another career, which is an e-sport athlete. Fix capitalization
there
Children
with great gaming skills
can become an
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athlete
. Generally, each Fix the agreement mistake
athletes
game
has its own league game
in which the winners of the tournament are rewarded with prize money and will also
receive fame. Thus
, the increase in the number of people who play games
created many new careers.
Nevertheless
, many parents claim that games
have a negative effect on children
’s health. It causes eye problems
, with symptoms such
as dry eyes, red eyes or irritated eyes, and these symptoms can occur if a kid spends a long time staring at a computer
screen. It may be true that some children
will face physical health problems
. However
, these problems
can be solved easily if children
can learn to improve management skills
by practicing
their kids to be responsible for themselves. Change the spelling
practising
Children
need to learn how to manage and balance their time to fit their lifestyle, and if they are able to do it, playing games
will not be the
problem for them anymore.
In conclusion, for all reasons mentioned above, Correct article usage
a
children
will receive several benefits by
playing Change preposition
from
games
. Such
as a way to earn a living, choose as a learning assistant, even helping students
to be responsible for themselves. Playing games
will not have a negative impact on Correct your spelling
children
children's
childrens
if they know how to manage their time and take care of themselves properly.Correct your spelling
children
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