Inspire of advances made in agriculture many people around the world so hungry. What is this cause what can be done about this problem.

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era, advancement of technology spread influence
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of the world and agriculture is not
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exempted
from
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.
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advances made in
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field
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many individuals around the world are hungry.
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essay contains
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reasons behind
this
issue along with some possible remedies to
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. Beginning with there
are
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number
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a number
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of reasons which justify
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why many people are hungry in every nation.
First
and foremost, due to
inflation
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,inflation
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the charges
of
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for
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goods are too high and people who belong to joint families are unable to afford
it
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them
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.
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, with
this
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the cost of
food
is increasing day by day. As well as, being overpopulated cities, the demand
of
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food
is higher
as
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compared to
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supply. Research conducted by world
Food
organizations,
for example
, in India
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shows that 70
percent
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per cent
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people
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of people
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hungry
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are hungry
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due to lack of
food
and ignorance of
government
.
As a result
,
shortage
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the shortage
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of
food
has many root causes behind it.
On the other hand
, there are some possible measures for tackling
this
problem.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
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should provide
cost
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the cost
a cost
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of free
food
as well as confer information related to
importance
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the importance
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of
food
. Meanwhile,
government
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the government
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can reduce the price
that
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everyone can afford
it
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and
fulfill
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their family needs. To cite an example,
survey
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a survey
the survey
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has been conducted in
USA
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the USA
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which shows that 80
percent
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populace solve their
food
issues by receiving aid from
government
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the government
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in the term of free of cost
food
every month.
Therefore
, these are
the
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fruitful ways for solving
this
problem. To sum up,
although
there
are
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number
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a number
the number
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of reasons behind
this
problem
but
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with some suitable
remedies
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,remedies
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food
shortage can be resolved.
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