Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people around the world strongly believe

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benefits of nuclear

weapons

.

In contrast

to their opinions, in my point of view, nuclear

weapons

are too expensive and too dangerous for people to use.

Therefore

, I completely disagree that nuclear

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benefits outweigh the disadvantages.

First

and foremost, nuclear

weapons

are

serious

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threat to people’s

health

and to the country’s integrity. Regarding

to

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nuclear

weapons

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effects

on human

health

, since it is a tremendous source of radiation,

it

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may cost numerous

health

devastations for humans. Take Hiroshima as an example in terms of

health

. People are still suffering from its malignant

effects

. Not only does it affect

health

, but it

also

affects

buildings

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of

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the country too.

This kind

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of

weapons

have

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an extreme power of destructiveness. It may cause long-term

harms

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due to the fact that

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power has

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potential of spreading all over the city. Another thing is nuclear

weapons

need a huge budget from the government. Not only for their building but

also

for fixing their enormous detrimental

effects

after using it. As mentioned before, it has unwanted

effects

for citizens and their towns which will need

health

founding and rebuilding money

afterward

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undoubtfully. It is not necessary to

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these

weapons

having only a tiny amount of usefulness rather than spending money on some other beneficial and peaceful machines. All in all,

although

there are still beliefs in regard

nuclear

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weapons

benefits, I totally disagree

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ideas. As far as I’m concerned, the world would be a better and more peaceful place without them.