With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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day and age, there is no doubt that the development of the
internet
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has made our people's lives a lot easier and more convenient while some individuals think that it has more drawbacks than benefits. In my personal opinion, I disagree that the disadvantages overshadow the advantages and I will explain why in the paragraphs.
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and foremost, it is undeniable that the
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is playing an important role in
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age and era since everything is connected with the
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locally and globally. There are many things that are connected to the
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such
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as shopping, communications, education, work and so on.
For example
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, most people use social media
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as Facebook and Instagram to communicate with each other in an easy and fast way. Another example is that we can know the global
news
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just by checking the BBC
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website in a
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and
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can be shared within a minute through the social media we can know the
news
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as soon as it occurs.
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, children can
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study online via zoom and other platforms like google meet and google classroom.
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, they will have extra time to study and revise what they have learnt and they can
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save their energy.
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, for the working people, they do not have to go long journey to work and they can
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work from home which is very time and energy saving.
However
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although
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there are so many benefits, there can be many disadvantages
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as not being productive and being lazy by working and studying from home. To conclude,
although
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there are a few drawbacks, it is undeniable that technology has made everything a lot easier and helps us to connect with everything from all around the world.
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