More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
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this
trend offers multiple professsional
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however
on the downside it leads to lonliness
. I believe that the Correct your spelling
loneliness
positve
aspects take precedence over the drawbacks.
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positive
benefit
of working away from family and friends is growth in professional life. Change to a plural noun
benefits
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less
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offer
a
better salary packages and numerous other benefits. Correct the article-noun agreement
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As a result
, most of
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people
find Add an article
the people
this
lucrative and they move away from their relatives in order to attain better living standards. For instance
in India, due to boom
in the IT sector, Correct article usage
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majority
majoirty
of inhabitants moved away from their native places in search of better employment.
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Nevertheless
, there are few
drawbacks in terms of Correct article usage
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lonliness
when it comes to staying apart from the Correct your spelling
loneliness
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people
. This
is due to working people
will find no one to share their feelings.
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with.
Alongside the
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The
people
who are workmates are not that close knit
as compared to friends and family to share the emotions. Add a hyphen
close-knit
Therefore
, sometimes it may lead to mental depression. To illustrate, a recent study concluded that working away from family and friends is the primary reason of
depression.
In conclusion, Change preposition
for
although
there are few
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a few
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which
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that
outwieghs
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