Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental issues are of great concern around the world. Many
people
think that the loss of plant and animal Use synonyms
species
is the most severe consequence of a deteriorating Use synonyms
environment
while others argue that there are more important issues affecting the Use synonyms
environment
. I believe that the most serious threat to the Use synonyms
environment
is due to the many important issues influencing it.
One reason is that it would be impractical. In recent years, natural disasters have increased due to climate change. Some scientists believe that global warming has directly affected the oceans leading to tsunamis, floods, and snowstorms. Use synonyms
For example
, in 2004, Thailand, India, and Sri Lanka were affected by a terrible tsunami that originated in the Indian Ocean. Linking Words
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caused hundreds of thousands of deaths and became one of the deadliest natural disasters in modern history. Linking Words
Therefore
, if the government can address the causes of climate change, Linking Words
people
can avoid the loss of lives and property.
It might be claimed that some Use synonyms
people
are interested in the life of plants and animals because some Use synonyms
species
are at high risk of extinction. Use synonyms
This
argument states that even small temperature changes are enough to threaten hundreds of already struggling animal Linking Words
species
. Use synonyms
For example
, melting ice in the Arctic has reduced the amount of ice, which limits the access of polar bears to prey. Linking Words
This
places them on the endangered Linking Words
species
list and it is predicted that they may completely disappear by 2100. Humans cannot reverse when extinction happens so everyone should live more responsibly so as not to deplete a certain Use synonyms
species
.
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However
, Linking Words
this
environmental argument oversimplifies the issue. Indiscriminate discharge has become a habit of Linking Words
people
as well as their indifference that the Use synonyms
environment
has been polluted, it is useless to do anything, which has contributed to increasing the seriousness of the Use synonyms
environment
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the wastewater that has not been treated by enterprises has been dumped directly into rivers and lakes, polluting natural water sources, which violates the waste treatment process and causes pernicious contamination in the Linking Words
environment
.
In conclusion, it cannot be denied that there are numerous important sources related to the environmental issue. The natural world is threatened by climate change and is Use synonyms
also
influenced by serious pollution. These troubles directly menace Linking Words
people
's lives, so we especially have to pay attention and improve it to ensure the standard life of an individual.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite