Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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recently has been the main concern of many people.

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any other culprits that leads to environmental problems. In my opinion, it is not the only important ecological

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noticeable. Industrializing could be one of the big factors that cause environmental problems.

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nowadays clean sources of energy have been more and more popular, there are some developing countries

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use coal and gas, which will leave a bad impact on the environment

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as air pollution.

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, an enormous amount of gas emissions from manufactories annually will lead to the greenhouse effect.

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global warming happen but the health conditions of many

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, especially human could

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be declined.

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, the activity of factories is likely to be a big issue that needs considering when environmental troubles occur. There are people who assume that the loss of particular

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is the most priority environmental problem. Due to the high demand of modern people

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as food and energy, many animals are not able to escape from the overexploitation of many manufacturers. If

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happens, the biological diversity would become imbalanced, which leaves many unexpected consequences.

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, killing dolphins for meat will cause extinction.

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, the disappearance of

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could be the main reason for

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issue. It might be true that the extinction of some particular is the biggest problem of environmental.

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could not happen easily without human activity. Living in a modern community requires them to raise their lives standard. Tons of rubbish and smoke from vehicles in urban regions annually have narrowed down the spaces for animals and decreased the nature condition. The bad quality of soils will make the plants on that land stop developing, which results in the degradation of seeds in the

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generation.

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the reason why there are many environmental issues other than the loss of

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. All in all, the evidence suggests that the disappearance of particular

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is not the major culprit of environmental issues. The overwhelming

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industrial development could

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be in top concern when troubles happen. The government should have a stricter policy to avoid severe effects on nature in the future.