Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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governments and scientists, and it should be prioritized in all fields.
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question of whether the main cause of
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problem
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is the disappearance of particular species of plants and
animals
. I agree with
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statement for some reasons. Clearly, plants and
animals
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first
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a clean habitat for human beings. People usually consider forests as a lung of the Earth because they help balance the atmosphere.
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of it is that vegetation will absorb CO2 and release a significant amount of O2 through photosynthesis.
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thousands of years, people have destroyed the surroundings for
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economic development
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deforestation and hunting.
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, the extinction of many species causes many problems
such
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and other natural disasters. In brief, the loss of
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plants and
animals
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reason for
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environmental destruction. It might be claimed the rise in recent catastrophic natural disasters has been strongly linked to climate change. Many scientists have made the case that incremental rises in temperature, specifically involving the oceans,
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increased the frequency and potency of hurricanes, tsunamis, and blizzards. There are countless instances of these from the
last
two decades but the tsunami affecting mainly Indonesia, Malaysia and Thailand in 2004 is a particularly striking example.
This
was the largest natural disaster
this
century and resulted in thousands of deaths, injuries and billions of dollars in damages, the effects of which set these developing nations back economically for years. In my opinion, the loss of ecological diversity trumps any other environmental concerns. In order to remedy
this
problem, governments and individuals need to take serious steps to not only invest more in conservation efforts for endangered
animals
but
also
work towards long term reforms related to fossil fuels, carbon emissions and the other apparent catalysts for climate change.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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