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Nowadays, it is often argued that the relationship of adolescents with streets, and in certain regions of the US a
curfew
 is implemented which means that
teenagers
 cannot go out of home without an adult. From my point of view, the decision has negative,
such
 as neglecting freedom, and positive, like safety and to prevent of potential risks, outcomes. Even if
this
 restrictive decision has some advantages, disadvantages have more valid causes. On the one hand, the
curfew
 concept is one of the enemies of liberty and independence of the young.
First
 of all, they are at enough age to make their own choices, what it should be. For
this
 reason,
curfew
 and the thought that
teenagers
 must not leave their homes without accompanying an adult could create an unsocial generation due to not knowing how to decide on behalf of
teenagers
.
Furthermore
, as they are isolated from social life, they would not find a chance to face the reality of life,
in other words
, street hardships.
On the other hand
, the
curfew
 conducting currently may be a requirement in terms of safety.
For instance
, outside the home could include detrimental impacts on them
such
 as getting harmful habits like drug and alcohol use.
Additionally
, the friends met on the streets might affect badly to their behaviours.
This
 issue may impact their education life as well. By and large, the curfews and procedures as to going out are incorrect in respect of the adolescents' freedom and being isolated, despite some positive sides which can be ignored.
Teenagers
 are mature enough to take their decisions and it should continue without any prohibition.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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