In many cities around the world pollution levels have risen in recent years. Why are some cities becoming more pollutes? What effect does this have?
Due to the advancement in technologies and
industries
. Many big cities
around the globe becoming highly polluted. I think this
was caused by the huge amount of fossil fuel consumption by the major manufacturers and waste
production
. This
trend could harm health and the environment.
To begin
with, the increase
in energy consumption mostly was generated by the major industries
. Due to dealing with the demand, most industries
tend to increase
their production
. Consequently
, they burn more and more fuel for their machinery. In addition
, urbanization also
contributes to this
situation. For example
, Beijing, the capital city of China, has been announced as the most polluted city in the world. As a result
, some serious health problems and environmental degradation could be experienced by the community who live in urban cities
.
In addition
, the huge population might also
contribute to the increasing environmental problem in big cities
. Cities
are the centre of consumption such
as energy, green gas production
, waste
, and pollutant in water and air. For instance
, Jakarta, The Capital city of Indonesia with more than 15 million population face some issues related to waste
, waste
and land degradation. moreover
, this
issue was caused by the increasing public facilities which do not follow the increase
in population.
To summarize, in order to fulfil the demand for goods. most of the major industries
tend to increase
the production
of production
of the production
of their goods
Change to a genitive case
the production of their goods
production
. furthermore
, the huge number of people who move from the countryside to big cities
contribute to the environmental problems in some big cities
around the globe.Submitted by anwarachmad426 on
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