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Today, people are buying more consumer goods like jewelery and household appliances. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern society, the general public is buying more leisure and luxury products than ever before. Throughout
this
 essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 trend and express my own opinion on the matter.
Firstly
, I will discuss the negatives of people buying more consumer property and ,
secondly
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 I will share the positives of
this
 trend. Many customer furniture
do
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 not give any real benefit to the person who has bought them.
Moreover
, these purchased items may cost the user a substantial sum of money, possibly causing stress over personal finances.
For example
, many of these goods could be bought with loans, or other types of credit, which may not always be paid back due to lack of funds or other financial commitments. On top of that, household appliances
such
 as TVs and air conditioners need a lot of energy to be powered.
As a result
 of
this
, the individual will find they are again having to balance more bills and commitments than is achievable.
On the other hand
, jewellery and fashion give many
community
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 great happiness.
Furthermore
, if society has enough disposable income to spend on luxury items that make them happy,
then
 that should be their personal choice. If a person has enough money for an iPad without getting into debt,
then
 they should be free to buy that item. Many
folk
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 feel they should
also
 support certain companies and buy their products.
As a result
 of
this
, the producers of buyer furniture can employ large numbers of society, giving them jobs and financial support. In conclusion, there are many benefits and negatives to
population
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the population
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 purchasing more shopper equipment. In my opinion, overall the increase is a positive thing, as it shows that more folk have disposable income to spend on items they truly like.
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