Most of the people in the society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact to the society due to this?
Nowadays,
crime
movies
and criminal TV programs are the type of films that most people
in society prefer to watch. This
essay will discuss the reasons why citizens enjoy watching this
type of film and the consequences on society from this
perspective.
To begin
with, most men are likely to watch crime
movies
for entertainment and excitement more than to watch comedy movies
that would be boring for adults. For example
, my dad and I were likely to watch some horror movies
about criminals, hence
when they entered the theatre, we might have to see them. Furthermore
, the director can be the main reason why people
must watch this
type of film such
as James Wan the director of The Conjuring. In addition
, the social value can make people
tend to watch this
more than others.
On the other hand
, they can cause so many problems that must be happening in society, when citizens watch too much on criminal TV, it can cause them to do the same kinds of activities as in the movies
. For instance
, the research about how many people
begin to be criminals is caused by an increase in violent movies
in America. The government must prevent this
impact because it must lead to a decreasing number of people
who get killed or children kidnapped.
To sum up
, there are several reasons why citizens enjoy watching crime
movies
. Consequently
, it will impact the quality of life of people
and increase crime
rates.Submitted by napatnp18065322 on
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task achievement
You have provided a response that addresses the topic overall, but refining your reasons and giving more detailed, specific examples could greatly enhance your essay. For instance, clarifying why people find crime movies exciting or exploring more deeply the societal impacts can add depth.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to organizing paragraphs with clear topic sentences and ensure each paragraph explores a single idea thoroughly. This will help to make your essay more cohesive.
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Proofread your work to correct minor grammatical errors and ensure clarity of expression. For example, revisiting phrases like 'when they entered the theatre, we might have to see them' for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Your essay includes an introduction and conclusion which frames the discussion well.
task achievement
The use of the personal example about watching movies with your dad adds a personal touch and makes your argument relatable.
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