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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Every culture has its own unique mother tongue that distinguishes them from other cultures.
This
 spoken dialect gives the various tribes their identity.
Although
, a few
people
 believe it is not essential to have a multiplicity of
languages
. I completely disagree with the statement. As earlier mentioned,
language
 is distinctive and peculiar to a group of
people
 with the same geographical region, society and country. The diversity of
language
 is a feature that set humans apart from all other species on planet earth. Be that as it may, limiting the number of vernacular spoken in the world, will be subjecting individuals to do away with their origin and embed a foreign tongue.
This
, in turn, will lead to self-denial and frustration for those who are unable to learn
such
 tribes.
However
,
this
 trend might be profitable to some
people
.
For instance
, business owners will learn
languages
 that will be profitable for transactions.
On the contrary
, preserving the local dialect, give members of the locality a sense of belonging as well as recognition when in the midst of others.
Also
, multilingualism promotes cultural awareness and broadens one's horizons. Most tourists, tour a country for their cultural heritage and
also
 to learn a bit and sometimes more of the
language
.
Furthermore
,
Language
 extinction is harmful because
people
 lose cultures and knowledge with each lost
language
.
People
,
also
 lose the ability to understand the environment, different subjects around them and human cognition.
in addition
,Cultural diversity is important because it helps
people
 to grow intellectually. To conclude, minority
languages
 should be encouraged to avoid extinction in order to save ethnicity. Globalisation through diverse
languages
 makes the world beautiful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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