A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. HelShe has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sara, I'm writing with regard to your request for some advice for a novice camper. I hope
this
letter finds you healthy and wealthy. I believe a summer camping holiday would be a great opportunity to evaluate your abilities with a practical gauge.
In addition
, camping is not only a great situation to polish your life-saving skills but
also
can expand your horizons. To explain a drawback of
this
kind of pastime, I should mention that you have to be considerate of life-threatening activities like walking alone in the woods which could
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in a hazardous situation
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as facing a predator or being lost. I believe it would be awesome if I would be able to join you for the trip. I think the accompaniment of me and you will help us to create a memorable holiday. I hope you will consider my request favourably! With love Ali
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a distinct idea or aspect of the topic, thereby enhancing the logical flow of the letter.
task achievement
Expand on the explanations and provide more detailed examples in each paragraph to more fully develop your ideas.
coherence cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structures to maintain the reader's interest and to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical usage.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Budget-friendly
  • Unplugged retreat
  • Campsite
  • Tent pitching
  • Outdoor cooking
  • De-stress
  • Itinerary
  • Back-to-nature
  • Bonding experience
  • Hiking trails
  • Weather forecast
  • Amenities
  • Wildlife safety
  • Essential gear
  • Adventure
  • Disconnect
  • Tranquility
  • Navigational skills
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