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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well. Do you agree or disagree?

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Teenagers
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 spend most of their
time
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 in
school
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 without any contact with real society, and many of them play video games after
school
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. So some people believe that it is beneficial both for the
community
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 and
teenagers
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 if students are required to do
community
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work
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 in their free
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.
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, I strongly oppose
this
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 idea because I believe
teenagers
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 have plenty of better options for their spare
time
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 and their
work
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 quality can be questioned if they are required to do
work
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 after
school
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.
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 with, there are plenty of choices that are much better than
community
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work
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.
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, they can develop hobbies, read books, and participate in social activities. They can even do paid part-
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jobs
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 if they want to experience what
work
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 means. And if
work
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 is paid, it can be easily evaluated whether
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work
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 is more valuable than playing the piano at home. Unpaid
jobs
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 are less valuable than paid ones, and
teenagers
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 may even choose other valuable activities rather than paid
jobs
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. In
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 case, it is hard to say
community
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work
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 is the best choice for teens' free
time
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.
Secondly
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, I doubt the quality of mandatory, after-
school
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work
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from
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 youngsters. I assume most of their
work
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 can not meet the standard of the
community
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. To illustrate, homework is one of the things which are mandatory in juveniles' free
time
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. With the apparent benefit and strict supervision, they still can not deliver their
work
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 on
time
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.
Community
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work
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 which is far more difficult than homework won't be done to high standards
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.
Thus
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 required free
work
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 from juveniles can hardly help communities to reduce their workload. To conclude, requiring students to participate in unpaid
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 after
school
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 is unwise because students have plenty of better options and the delivery can never meet the standard of the
community
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. Alternatively, the
community
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 can open some part-
time
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jobs
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 for teens. In
this
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 way, teens will treat the
work
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 more seriously and, as a consequence, both will benefit more.
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