Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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There is no denying the fact that the country will meet some

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in the future.

This

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essay will discuss the issues my country may face in the next decade, and how can we conserve them.

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with, there are many potential

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my country may face in the future.

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, the

population

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causes damage to the

environment

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, expands the ozone layer

as a result

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of using a lot of plastic material and old cars that affect the ozone badly.

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, the level of education will decrease

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people working in lower-level jobs that provide the minimum basic of living. In terms of the solutions to these

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, increase awareness among people of the importance of perceiving the

environment

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population

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, and education. It is

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possible to say that teaching people about eco-friendly energy will help them understand the main problem, use less plastic and be encouraged to use bicycles to go to work, which may help the

environment

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and their health

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, regarding

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, many countries have enacted a law on

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matter.

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, China has a law that states that each family is allowed to have only one child, and in the event of violation of that, both parents will be punished. On the opposite side India, where the

population

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outnumbers the natural resources,

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as water and food from farms, causes

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for both the

population

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and the

environment

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. In conclusion, there are many issues a lot of countries will face in the future. It is

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true that

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can be solved.

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Revise and edit your work to ensure there are no grammatical errors or awkward phrasings that might detract from your main points.

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The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

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The introduction sets up the context of the discussion well, identifying the issues to be addressed.

coherence cohesion

The essay concludes with a summary of the issues and a positive note that suggests solutions are possible.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

264 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problems of traffic and polluon. What effects do you think this move can have? What other measures do you think can be taken to reduce traffic and pollution ?

Some companies use a lot of packaging when selling their products. Why is this? Is it a good thing?