Write a letter to your friend asking him or her to take care of your childern while you are away on a business trip. In your letter, Write what they like to eat . Write how they would spend their time. Suggest an arrangement to pick them up after the trip.
Dear John,
I hope you are fine at home and enjoying your week off work in your accommodation
I am busy as usual .Actually, I am going on a four-day business trip next Monday.Do you think you could take care of my kids
while
I am away? I am not exactly comfortable about leaving them in a daycare centre.That's why i
am asking for your help.If you think you could babysit , I will drop them at your place on Monday Morning.
They are very easy-going and get on well with everybody -they are particularly fond of you.As for their habits , well, they are not really into veggies , but they do eat fruits and cereals.So you should have no trouble keeping them full throughout the day.You Change the capitalization
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don't have to worry about keeping them busy .They would pass their time watching TV or playing video games.In the evenings , you could perhaps take them for a walk.I will be back in town on Thursday evening and pick them up from your place on my way home from the airport.
I hope you don't mind doing this
for me.
Many Thanks.
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task response
Ensure that the information provided directly addresses the task and purpose of the letter. Include more details on the children's needs and any specific instructions for their care.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and effective opening and closing. Ensure that the ideas in each paragraph are logically connected and well-organized to improve coherence and cohesion.