International travel is becoming coming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh disadvantages?

Traveling
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enthusiasts are taking
advantages
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to explore different
countries
because of
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expenses as well as numerous nations are giving
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the opportunity
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opportunity
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opportunities
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in welcoming massive tourists. I do believe that
merits
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of
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number of
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outweigh its drawbacks. I will explain my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand, the vast majority of
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industry offers
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airfare for them to pull back the plummeted status of their company; numerous nations are widely opening their doors to entice visitors from different parts of the globe. The reason for
this
is to recover the loss of economic revenue due to the pandemic that have had
occured
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occurred
.
For example
, in Korea, the government promotes
manifold
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of tourist spots
destination
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destinations
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to attract people in exploring excellent areas in
such
a way they could obtain high
economy
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income tax return that will tremendously help their country.
Thus
,
this
spectacular merits to the
countries
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economy
will help both airlines and different nations.
On the other hand
, those aircraft that
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discounts and promos
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a great significance to the public since extra money will be utilised on other commodities
at
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their households because
air fare
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airfare
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is less compared before.
Likewise
, the pros of inviting people to different host
countries
will benefit and introduce to
travelers
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travellers
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their locally made products that may boost their tourism industry.
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as
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a gamut of travel explorers
have
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been going to Switzerland have an
oppurtunity
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opportunity
to purchase their local handicrafts which may help the
native
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to have extra income and it has a tremendous effect to grow their
economy
.
Hence
,
lowcost
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airfare and opening the tourist spots in different
countries
will greatly contribute to the total revenue of both industries and
economy
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the economy
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. In summary, scanty amount of money in paying
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and widely opening
of
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different country doors to the people will benefit both
aviation
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the aviation
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industry and
countries
' economical revenue status.
This
is why positive
outweigs
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outweighs
outweigh
negative side.
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