Do you agree or disagree that the effects of increased global tourism are more likely to be harmful than beneficial?

It is argued that a possible higher risk rather than benefit on

effect

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the effect

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of increased global

tourism

.

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disagree

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with the statement mentioned above because global

tourism

is needed to have a rose for

countries

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countries'

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economy, and it is

opened

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to have made possible for

business

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the business

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.

Tourism

is one of the essential

role

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to have a significant and steady income in a country. Because of it,

economic

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the economic

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rise is attainable;

exchange

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an exchange

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in their money currency provides higher income.

Moreover

, global visitors

promotes

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the beauty of the country

,

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and

buying

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their product as well.

For instance

, a friend of mine visits the country South, Korea. She endorsed having enjoyed the culture at the same time their authentic food. Because of her, our group of

friend

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planned to go to Korea.

On the other hand

, land detrimental is more likely possible because of the infrastructure to

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apply

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have

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accommodate

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for

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apply

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a

tourism

rise.

Otherwise

, the government should impose a possible rule to protect and keep the land and the wildlife. On one hand,

tourism

unlocked potential new

business

especially

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,especially

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for the locals;

similarly

, it accesses to have income in small towns and

business

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businesses

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that can help the locals.

For example

,

a

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apply

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tourist spots in our small town, small

business

such

as food and souvenirs are opening because of

tourism

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the tourism

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boost. In conclusion, I strongly disagree about the negative effect is more than the positive effect of

global

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tourism

boost because it can raise the country’s economy, and it can unlock the possible local

business

.