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What are the good features of a good roommate? Describe the traits.

I lived in dormitory for two years and I was a roommate with different people and different features. Before looking forward to move in with anyone, you need to come up with some rules for your home/ apartment/ room. Here are some of the problems I had with my roommates: One of my roommates used my things without permission, and she often didn’t give them back or run out of my foodstuffs. She was very messy and never clean her mess up. She
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 put off doing dishes and eventually I had to wash her dirty dishes. Another of my roommates always had her friends over and she never asked me if I was OK with it or not. She was inconsiderate in energy consumption and always forgot turn off the TV, the lights, the air conditioner and so on. In coclution, to be a good roomate, you must follow the basic principles: -Be patient, flexible and thoughtful. -Respect each other’s rights and demands. -
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 of putting up with bad hapits and manners, speak with each other. -when a problems come up, try to get over it. -Do share the chores and do your own things.

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