write a letter to accomodation agency to find a suitable room for your stay. tell the reason why you are moving tell the room requirements and length of your stay
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing to request you find me an apartment in Hilton Street's neighbourhood. My entire house is going to be rebuilt so I have to move to a new accommodation.
I live with my husband and son,
therefore
, we need a double room furnished apartment with adequate equipment such
as stove, fridge, beds and some dishes. Since I have some problems climbing stairs, the building should be equipped with an elevator.
Moreover
, the flat must be near to an elementary school, as my son is studying in second grade and I do not want to annoy him by far distance from his new school.
I can afford 400 Dollars per week and am ready to pay for two months in advance.
Please send me any appropriate case you have in your database and I will reply with my feedback.
Look forward to visiting your suggestions soon.
Yours sincerely,
Zahra ValiSubmitted by keyhan454 on
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Style
Consider varying your sentence structure more to enhance readability and interest. While the current structure is clear, incorporating a mix of complex and compound sentences can provide a more engaging and sophisticated tone.
Detail
To further improve, it may be beneficial to include a closing line that directly specifies your preferred contact method or a time frame for when you hope to hear back, adding a sense of urgency or personal touch.
Structure
Your letter is well-structured, maintaining a logical flow of ideas from the introduction through to the conclusion, which greatly aids in its readability and clarity.
Content
Good job on specifying your room requirements and the length of your stay in a concise manner, which directly addresses the task at hand.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.