Last month, you traveled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter ● apologize for not meeting him/her ● explain why you did not contact him/her earlier ● suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear Tom, Hope you are doing well, I hope you remember Julie our school friend, I met her

this

morning and we discussed

about

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our old school days and the memories we shared together. I want to apologize to you for something I was not expecting but it happened. I feel terrible that I came

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month to your city but unfortunately didn'

get a chance to see you. I was there for a very short period of time with my office staff

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our business conference and had a very busy schedule over there. I lost your contact number and I didn'

even have your new home address so I couldn'

able to meet you in your city. I would suggest you

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come over my place

month and let's spend some time together at my house, I know you have never been to Sydney and let me tell you will love being here every single day and I want to take you to all my favourite restaurants here, as I know you are a foodie and you will have a great time here. I really can'

wait to see you! Yours lovingly, Joy

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

196 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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