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Last month, you traveled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter ● apologize for not meeting him/her ● explain why you did not contact him/her earlier ● suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear Tom, Hope you are doing well, I hope you remember Julie our school friend, I met her
this
 morning and we discussed
about
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our old school days and the memories we shared together. I want to apologize to you for something I was not expecting but it happened. I feel terrible that I came
last
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 month to your city but unfortunately didn'
t
 get a chance to see you. I was there for a very short period of time with my office staff
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 our business conference and had a very busy schedule over there. I lost your contact number and I didn'
t
 even have your new home address so I couldn'
t
 able to meet you in your city. I would suggest you
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come over my place
next
 month and let's spend some time together at my house, I know you have never been to Sydney and let me tell you will love being here every single day and I want to take you to all my favourite restaurants here, as I know you are a foodie and you will have a great time here. I really can'
t
 wait to see you! Yours lovingly, Joy
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