In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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food
is better in comparison to Use synonyms
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fast Correct article usage
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food
in terms of nutritional value.
On the one hand, there are people who believe that Use synonyms
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food
is a better choice because it saves Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
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is because these days people have Linking Words
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lifestyle
life style
, due to that they are not finding ample Correct your spelling
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time
to cook. When it comes to fast Use synonyms
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it is widely available and Use synonyms
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unlike
the traditional Add the comma(s)
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which needs a lot of diligence and Use synonyms
time
for Use synonyms
prepration
. Correct your spelling
preparation
For instance
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the multinational companies in South Korea serve fast Change preposition
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food
in their canteen to employees. Use synonyms
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saves the Linking Words
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of
employees and it leads to Change preposition
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enhance
their productivity at work. Wrong verb form
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is Use synonyms
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choice when it comes to Add an article
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time saving
potential.
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On the other hand
, others think that traditional Linking Words
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is more healthy. Use synonyms
This
is because cultural Linking Words
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include
only Change the verb form
includes
the
fresh ingredients and does not involve Correct article usage
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usage
of preservatives and frozen products, which may be unhealthy for human consumption. Correct article usage
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As a result
, it boosts the immunity of human beings and helps them to stay away from diseases. To illustrate, a recent study concluded that a primary cause of obesity in Linking Words
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American teenagers is linked with increased consumption of Correct article usage
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food
from the Use synonyms
fast
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fast-food
food
chains Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
kfc
and burger king. Correct your spelling
KFC
Thus
, in order to stay healthy and fit, it is preferred to consume traditional Linking Words
food
only.
In conclusion, while Use synonyms
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is a good option for the working professionals in terms of Use synonyms
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time saving
. It is my firm belief that cultural Add a hyphen
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food
is the best. Use synonyms
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is because traditional Correct your spelling
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food
meets the standard dietary daily requirements, which is crucial to Use synonyms
maintain
a healthy lifestyle.Wrong verb form
maintaining
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