In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that traditional

food

is beneficial to eat, whilst others disagree and think that

junk

food

is a better option.

This

essay discusses both

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and why I believe that cultural

food

is better in comparison to

the

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fast

food

in terms of nutritional value. On the one hand, there are people who believe that

junk

food

is a better choice because it saves

time

.

This

is because these days people have

busier

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lifestyle

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life style

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, due to that they are not finding ample

time

to cook. When it comes to fast

food

it is widely available and

moreover

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if someone

want

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to eat

food

at home it takes only minutes to prepare the

food

unlike

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the traditional

food

which needs a lot of diligence and

time

for

prepration

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preparation

.

For instance

, most

of

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the multinational companies in South Korea serve fast

food

in their canteen to employees.

This

saves the

time

of

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employees and it leads to

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their productivity at work.

Therefore

,

junk

food

is

better

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choice when it comes to

food

due to its

time saving

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potential.

On the other hand

, others think that traditional

food

is more healthy.

This

is because cultural

food

include

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only

the

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fresh ingredients and does not involve

usage

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of preservatives and frozen products, which may be unhealthy for human consumption.

As a result

, it boosts the immunity of human beings and helps them to stay away from diseases. To illustrate, a recent study concluded that a primary cause of obesity in

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American teenagers is linked with increased consumption of

food

from the

fast

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fast-food

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food

chains

such

as

kfc

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KFC

and burger king.

Thus

, in order to stay healthy and fit, it is preferred to consume traditional

food

only. In conclusion, while

junk

food

is a good option for the working professionals in terms of

time saving

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. It is my firm belief that cultural

food

is the best.

The

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is because traditional

food

meets the standard dietary daily requirements, which is crucial to

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a healthy lifestyle.