In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent years , many communities preferred finding the history of the
apartment
or building they are staying in.There are various issues regarding the motive like -paranormal,
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of the condominium and
finally
what
material
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are
using
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to build
this
.
People
explore before owning
the
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apartment
and
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its increases
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the fact of social media.
First
of all, by using social media
people
watch that, some
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paranormal
paradoxical
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when they shift to a new
house
. So they want to know the historical background before
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or renting a
house
.
Secondly
,
customer
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the customer
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also
wants to know the material that uses to build the
house
. Because recently, the earthquake and
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of natural
disaster
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are forming in the world which crashes a lot of
house
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houses
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.
People
do research before they rent
a
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apartment
. They ask the owner
details
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about the building and they
also
investigate
in
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the web. For
eaxample
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,
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days ago we sold our own
apartment
. The buyer
asking
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us several
question
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regarding the
hiouse
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house
mouse
.
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we satisfied them with
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they are asking and we handover the
apartment
smoothly. In conclusion, it can be said that
people
are curious before buying something old or new. In the case of huge and long time investment to buy
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they research every pros and
cons
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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