Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people around the world strongly believe in the benefits of nuclear
weapons
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to their opinions, in my point of view, nuclear
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are too expensive and too dangerous for people to use.
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, I completely disagree that nuclear
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weapons
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benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
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and foremost, nuclear
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are a serious threat to people’s
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and to the country’s integrity. Regarding nuclear
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effects
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on human
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, it may cost numerous
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devastations for humans since it is a tremendous source of radiation. Take Hiroshima as an example in terms of
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. People are still suffering from its malignant
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. Not only does it affect
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, but it
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affects the buildings of the country too. These kinds of
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have an extreme power of destructiveness. It may cause long-term deleterious consequences due to the fact that its power has the potential of spreading all over the city. Another thing is nuclear
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need a huge budget from the government. Not only for their building but
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for fixing their enormous detrimental
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after using it. As mentioned before, it has unwanted
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for citizens and their towns which will need
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founding and rebuilding money afterwards undoubtfully. It is not necessary to fund these
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having only a tiny amount of usefulness rather than spending money on some other beneficial and peaceful machines. All in all,
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there are still beliefs in regard to nuclear
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benefits, I totally disagree
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ideas. As far as I’m concerned, the world would be a better and more peaceful place without them.
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