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Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people around the world strongly believe in the benefits of nuclear
weapons
.
In contrast
 to their opinions, in my point of view, nuclear
weapons
 are too expensive and too dangerous for people to use.
Therefore
, I completely disagree that nuclear
weapons
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weapons'
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 benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
First
 and foremost, nuclear
weapons
 are a serious threat to people’s
health
 and to the country’s integrity. Regarding nuclear
weapons
’
effects
 on human
health
, it may cost numerous
health
 devastations for humans since it is a tremendous source of radiation. Take Hiroshima as an example in terms of
health
. People are still suffering from its malignant
effects
. Not only does it affect
health
, but it
also
 affects the buildings of the country too. These kinds of
weapons
 have an extreme power of destructiveness. It may cause long-term deleterious consequences due to the fact that its power has the potential of spreading all over the city. Another thing is nuclear
weapons
 need a huge budget from the government. Not only for their building but
also
 for fixing their enormous detrimental
effects
 after using it. As mentioned before, it has unwanted
effects
 for citizens and their towns which will need
health
 founding and rebuilding money afterwards undoubtfully. It is not necessary to fund these
weapons
 having only a tiny amount of usefulness rather than spending money on some other beneficial and peaceful machines. All in all,
although
 there are still beliefs in regard to nuclear
weapons
 benefits, I totally disagree
their
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 ideas. As far as I’m concerned, the world would be a better and more peaceful place without them.
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