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Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

#think #ambition #quality
Ambition is a clear characteristic of human beings. A huge part of individuals
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 that it is beneficial to be ambitious. I firmly believe that it is
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feature
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 for people, which impacts
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 their character. There exist various reasons behind
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 of all, people can
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 their goals, due to
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 of targets, regardless
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 nation and profession, which related to different complications
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