You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about problems which I am facing while staying at one of the accommodations in college. I am a final-year undergraduate student who is perusing computer science and sharing a
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with another student in the Hostel A building.
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it was comfortable at the beginning, it has become challenging to tolerate over the recent past. The foremost problem with
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is that it is near to the laundry area, which makes it very noisy.
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, I face difficulty while sleeping at night.
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, my roommate brings many visitors to the place. They do converse loudly which makes it impossible for me to concentrate on my study.
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, I am requesting a
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transfer. I am interested in either a single-occupancy
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or having a roommate who is from my batch only
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so that our timings would not differ. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible as my exams are approaching. Because it is my final year, I need to focus on my studies as well as prepare for placements. Yours faithfully, Gurpreet Kaur
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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