What do you think,what are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers.

Computers

have become an integral part of our life. Now they are used in almost all

sphere

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like education, administration, banking, healthcare and others. Some people think that

computers

have made our life more comfortable, but others have a negative view. In my opinion, there

many

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benefits of using

computers

.

First

of all, one of the main advantages of using

computers

that

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we get a lot of

informations

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off

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from

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them. Our

computer

is open 24 hours a day

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library

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or office.

Moreover

,

the

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transportation is realized by

computer

technology.

For example

, at present

aeroplane

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are faster than

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past. It is

also

used by architects for designing many buildings.

Furthermore

, we can do e-shopping, e-learning, e-business,

e-cash

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by sitting at home. At the moment people can't imagine life without

computers

.

On the other hand

, there are significant disadvantages

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computers

.

Firstly

, using a

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computers

lead to poor

eyesightand

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eyesight and

eyesight

and other diseases.

Besides

, young children play online games and waste a lot of hours a day at home

instead

of enjoying physical games outside.

In addition

, most

computer

programmas

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programmes

include

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problems,

grammar

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check

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and students depend on

computers

. Main

disadvantages

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of the

computers

that

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is that

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hackers use the

computer

to hack the

date

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data

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of

company

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companies

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and credit card numbers of people. In conclusion,

computers

are good and useful, but we are

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on overly them, we should use

computers

only

their

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benefits

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.