Many people today find that the cost of attaining a University-level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the causes of this situation, and how can governments, Universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?

In our developed or developing communities ,most people believe in “continuing education to the university- level would be a necessity for
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in near future” as they will need to find appropriate
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earn
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, and be able to contest with others in our new competitive societies. But, how can
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or even Governments deal with so
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tuition
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which should be paid to
universities
and how
universities
are able to make entrance easier for their
students
,despite gaining the expenditures. As the population rise,
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of
students
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to
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colleges
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universities
will be more, in
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of academic seats
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limited and
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for increasing
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ability depends on spending a lot of
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and having enough expert academic members in
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, so , it makes a competitive situation for pupils how to arrive in the university they like. Most
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they should afford to pay the
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tuition
which is requested by the academy. But is there any solution
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this
problem? Yes,
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better support by governments like subsidization to
students
or providing some
part
of expenses in
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colleges
challenges
to make less the costs of
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process and
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and
on the other
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their numbers and amounts of scholarships for intelligent and diligent
students
to motivate them to start their sightly discipline,
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, pupils can
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to work in different parts and departments in
universities
for
money
that make them affordable to pay at least some
part
of their charges . In conclusion,
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tuition
fee like many other things in our society has
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risen
raised
and it is related to many different items like budget should be paid to teachers, maintenance expenditures which are used to keep the
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college
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in the best situation and cost for expanding
universities
.At
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could play the main role to assume
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of costs and
universities
must let their interested and intelligent
students
could enter even if they should give them
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loans
or let them work there in their free time for getting
money
.
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