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Some people say that school children should study history as a main subject. Others think that others subject are more important for children in modern society. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

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Few people say that school pupils should study
history
 as a core
subject
.Others believe that other subjects are more important for
children
 in the modern era.I personally believe that
both
 should be given equal importance.In
this
 essay,I will discuss
both
 these views and give my opinion.
Firstly
,studying
history
 help
children
 to know about the culture and
history
 of their country.As it makes them take pride in knowing how ancient their
history
 and culture are.
As a result
,an individual cherishes these data for his entire life and passes them to the
next
 generation.
Moreover
,it
also
 helps them to learn about their family
history
 by studying
history
 as a core
subject
.Since by learning
history
 as a main
subject
 an individual will have prior
knowledge
 to know about his family
history
.
For example
,the research conducted in India revealed that most of the person
don't
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 know about their family
history
 because they lack
knowledge
 about historical subjects.
Lastly
,in the modern era ,learning computer programmes help
children
 to survive in the modern era which can offer them a lucrative job.As the modern lifestyle involve the use of various social media platforms it gives more opportunity to
children
 to develop a job on
this
 platform.
Additionally
,field like the defence sector is rapidly advancing,so
children
 should have prior
knowledge
 of science.Because it offers more jobs in
this
 field and should attain certain skills to grab
this
 work.
For instance
,a survey conducted at a university showed that most people can't grab a job in the science sector is due to they studied
history
 as a main
subject
. In my opinion,as
both
 fields are extremely important for human life
both
 should be given to lead a successful life. In ,
the
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conclusion as
both
 fields offer different
knowledge
 to
human
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both
 should be given equal priority.So,I partially agree with the above-mentioned statement.
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