As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over studying and living abroad to learn about the culture and foreign language of
students
. While this
statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it may do more harm than good.
Studying abroad should only be an option because there are many influencing factors. Not all students
are eligible to study
abroad because they depend on the direction and financial ability of the family. Currently, many students
are oriented to study
and take exams in the country, they have no desire to study
abroad because they cannot afford to study
and live in another country. Not only that, a less expensive route than a scholarship is very difficult to achieve. For example
, if a student cannot pay for living expenses abroad and has to do half-day work at the same time, it will be very tiring and affect academic performance. Instead
, they want to focus on studying and taking exams in their home country. So studying abroad is just a suggestion for students
to choose for their study
.
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
However
, if students
have good results, they can apply for a scholarship to study
abroad which will help them reduce their financial burden because learning about the culture and experiencing a new form of study
will help themselves
a lot in the future. Correct pronoun usage
them
Students
who have time to experience in
a different educational environment will be able to expand their knowledge and capitalChange preposition
apply
,
and have more job opportunities abroad after completing their studies. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, nowadays there are many Vietnamese students
trying to get scholarships from foreign universities to receive a more advanced education. Therefore
, students
can have many ways to learn and live in an international environment.
To sum up, education abroad is a thing that has a positive impact on students
but it needs to be weighed by the financial capacity of the family. However
, there are also
solutions for them to study
in an international educational environment by getting a scholarship.Submitted by hominhtrang995 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite