A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

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letter after reading an article in a magazine about sharing thoughts related to the booklet that had a huge impact on my life. The name of the novel is " Mera Daghistaan" by Rasool Hamzatov. In brief, it tells the story of a young Dagestani man's journey to find his identity and purpose in life.

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book contains a lot of kindness and love for people and the fatherland. I like

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book as the characters in the novel are complex, and the story is both heartwarming and heartbreaking.

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fiction is a very engaging and unique account of the writer's personal life and love for the 'Avar' language. It is one of the most important books to read to remember the mother language. it is the best autobiography that provides aesthetic pleasure.

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is a paperback for those people who love their motherland and language

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full of adventure, and romance and captures the unique culture of Daghistaan. I think

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information will be sufficient for your article. If you need any

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details, please let me know. Yours sincerely, Tajinder Singh

tajinder.panagSun Dec 17 2023

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Task Response

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the prompt to maintain clarity and organisation. While the letter touches on the key points, some elaboration on how exactly the book influenced the writer's life and perspectives could enhance the response.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a good logical structure and a clear greeting and closing, but could benefit from transitions and linking words to better connect ideas and ensure smooth flow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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